Wednesday, 31 July 2019

Flying carpet

Hi this here is one of my quick writes. This week we had to do a hook.You see the word in purple that one of my hook's, a sound effect. Do you see the part in yellow that's the part that i like the most.

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  1. Hi Mako,
    I like how you have included your quickwrite in your post. maybe next time explain the quickwrite better and include the other quick writes in the post. Although I don't quite get why a apple was chasing him?
    -Hunter

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